Fridays September 24 , 2010

Today during silent reading in Hamiltons class I read a book called IT WAS ON FIRE WHEN I LAY DOWN ON IT by ROBERT FULGHUM this book is about a mother who is very thrilled that her daughter is getting married, her mother is the one that is planning everything, the bide had a couple of snacks before the wedding and when she was walking down the isle the bride throws up, and the mother ends up fainting on the floor..thats about as far as i got into the book! :)

Wednesday September 22,2010

Today in expository reading and writhing Mr. Hamilton mentioned to us that the first sentence determines the direction of your paragraph. We revised a few topic sentences that were not good enough and made them sound professional. Today we also remembering that we need to have ONE TOPIC SENTENCE PER PARAGRAPH!

Tuesday September 21, 2010

Today in class we learned that you need one topic paragraph for the essay, we also learned that you're word choices that you use are a really important to the essay and it makes the reader keep on reading the essay.

Week of Monday September 20, 2010

Stephany

Today I learned about how we need to put the commas where you here them in the sentence, like in this sentence "Everyone would spend days, even months, working on their cars.


Spencer Mc

Today in class we learned about how the topic sentence is needed to set an essay